Watercolour Abstracts ? 2013-10-10, 17

The Spirit of One 2013-10-10, 17  

10-1/4" x 13-1/4" painted area

I consider this one to be much better, yet I can still do better . . .
Can you see the improvement ?

I find my brushwork, including large washes, and thinking while painting are improving greatly by doing these abstracts.